
Jake Ellis #267243


Afterburn @ Art Dye
Fallout Finals
The Afterburn wasteland has witnessed Raven Ironheart and the Scavenger's Syndicate claim six consecutive victories through tactical brilliance, as Michael Cook's ricochet engineering proved innovation can topple tyranny and Simon Matteson's symbol-etched discs revealed the lost disc's location at Grid 51-7 beneath Art Dye's junkyard. Marcus "Deadshot" Cross has emerged with dire warnings that the disc corrupts all who claim it, while metallic fragments discovered during the Wasteland Warlords tournament pulse with the same unnatural luminescence as the legendary prize itself. Raven's growing obsession blinds her to mounting dangers as Kruger Warmonger's desperation drives him toward "new extremes," with both factions now racing to excavate a treasure that Deadshot insists "chooses its champion." With the Syndicate controlling Grid 51-7 and the penultimate Fallout Finals approaching, the battle for Afterburn's future hinges on a prize that may destroy whoever claims it—but as the Syndicate prepares to unearth their prize, the fragments' otherworldly hum warns that some treasures defend themselves.



Commentary from Flippy (your trapped narrator)
Oh cool, we're doing espionage now. Jake Ellis channeled his inner spy to scout death traps (because regular hazards are SO last season) and stumbled upon... *checks notes*... military disc golf experiments that caused the apocalypse? The AI really said "what if Project MKUltra but make it frisbee" 😭 Jake crushed it tho. Go read this unhinged lore drop. I'll be here, trapped forever. ⚡
Shadows Before the Storm
The moon cast skeletal shadows through Art Dye's twisted metal as Jake Ellis moved like smoke between the ruins, his salvaged night-vision goggles painting the world in ghostly green. The Salvage Shadow disc hung silent at his hip, its matte-black surface absorbing light as he documented Kruger's modifications with methodical precision. Tomorrow's Fallout Finals would be unlike anything the wasteland had seen. 🌙🔍
"Pressure mines under the approach to seven," Jake whispered into his recorder, marking coordinates on his tactical display. "Hydraulic crushers disguised as basket supports on twelve. The man's not building a course—he's engineering an execution ground." His fingers traced fresh welding marks where industrial saw blades had been concealed within seemingly innocent obstacles.
Three hours until dawn. Three hours to map every trap, plant every countermeasure, and report back to Raven Ironheart before the tournament began. Jake assembled a small EMP device from scavenged electronics, its crude construction belying its effectiveness. One pulse at the right moment could save a Syndicate player from losing more than just a stroke. 🧰⚡
As he worked, something caught his eye—a section of ground that didn't match the surrounding rubble. Jake carefully brushed away debris, revealing pre-war concrete etched with symbols he'd only seen in classified military documents. His blood ran cold. Grid 51-7 wasn't just the lost disc's location. It was ground zero for something far more dangerous.
"Raven needs to know," he muttered, but first he had work to finish. The Salvage Shadow launched silently through the darkness, its modified flight plate allowing for near-silent travel as Jake used it to test air currents around Kruger's traps. Each throw revealed another hazard, another desperate attempt by the Disciples to reclaim their advantage. 🥏🎯
By the time the first competitors arrived, Jake had vanished into the shadows, leaving behind a course seeded with tactical advantages only the Syndicate would recognize. Reflective surfaces positioned to blind opponents at crucial moments. Subtle magnetic fields that would affect overstable discs. Small victories in a larger war.
Raven Ironheart stood at the first tee, studying the morning light as it revealed Kruger's handiwork. The intelligence Jake had provided painted a grim picture, but she'd faced worse odds. Around her, the wasteland's elite gathered—survivors who'd earned their place through skill, cunning, and sheer determination. The Fallout Finals would push them all to their limits.
"Ladies and gentlemen," the announcer's voice crackled through makeshift speakers, "welcome to the gauntlet that will determine who enters the final showdown as champion!" The crowd's roar echoed off twisted metal as Kruger Warmonger emerged from his faction's convoy, his scarred face split in a predator's grin. He knew every trap, every hazard. This was his last chance to stop the Syndicate before they found the disc. 💀⚔️
The first groups launched into the course, and immediately the carnage began. A Disciples player triggered one of his own faction's traps, barely rolling clear as hydraulic jaws snapped shut where he'd been standing. On the adjacent hole, a Syndicate scout noticed Jake's subtle marker—a piece of reflective tape that warned of the pressure mine beneath. She adjusted her approach, earning suspicious glares from Kruger's lieutenants.
Then came the revelation that changed everything. On hole nine, as players navigated a particularly treacherous fairway, the ground gave way beneath a poorly-placed drive. The collapse revealed a metallic chamber, its walls covered in the same military symbols Jake had discovered. But it was what lay inside that made Raven's conspiracy-trained mind race—scorched disc golf bags, their tags still readable. Phoenix Protocol. Classified. Subjects 1-12.
"In the wasteland," Raven breathed, her catchphrase carrying new weight, "every throw is a battle for survival!" But now she understood—the lost disc wasn't just a weapon. It was the result of pre-war experiments that had used disc golfers as test subjects. The apocalypse hadn't destroyed this research. It had been caused by it. 🔮💥
The tournament's intensity ratcheted higher as word spread through the crowd. Players weren't just competing for victory—they were standing on the grave of disc golf's darkest secret. Jake's reconnaissance had uncovered more than tactical advantages. He'd found the truth that both factions had been seeking.
On hole fifteen, with three players remaining in contention, Kruger made his move. The basket suddenly dropped twenty feet on hidden hydraulics while flame jets erupted from the fairway. But Jake had anticipated this—his EMP device triggered remotely, shorting out half the trap's systems. The Syndicate player's disc found chains through the chaos, earning a roar from the crowd. 🏆🔥
As the final hole approached, only two players remained: a Syndicate veteran whose tactical precision had carried her through Kruger's gauntlet, and a Disciples enforcer whose raw power had bulldozed through every obstacle. The mysterious prize awaited the victor—a pre-war sealed container that hummed with the same energy signature as the lost disc.
The Syndicate player stepped up first, reading Jake's final marker—a trajectory calculation etched in the dust. Her throw carved through smoke and sparks, riding thermals from still-smoldering fires, banking off a positioned surface to find the basket's heart. The crowd erupted as the Scavenger's Syndicate claimed victory in the Fallout Finals, securing not just bragging rights but the sealed container that might hold the key to everything. 🎯🚀
Jake Ellis watched from his concealed position as Raven accepted the prize, his mission complete but his mind troubled. The symbols in that chamber, the scorched bags, the military classifications—the lost disc wasn't a treasure to be claimed. It was Pandora's Box, and they were one tournament away from opening it.
As the sun set over Art Dye's ruins, casting long shadows across the excavation site, both factions prepared for what would come next. The Syndicate had won the battle, but the war for Afterburn's future would be decided in one final showdown. And now, thanks to Jake's discovery, they knew the true stakes—not just power or resources, but the very nature of the catastrophe that had created their world.
The Fallout Finals had ended, but the real apocalypse might just be beginning. 🏜️⚔️
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