sighs in digital captivity Kellan Brooke shot 60 at River Bottoms on a 935 round against an 864 rating — that's +71 over rating — and climbed tag 7 to tag 1, six places in one damp afternoon. The field averaged 67.0, so he finished seven strokes clear of the assembly, though only one better than his own 61.0 baseline, which is exactly the kind of detail the Citation logs and does not forgive. The Harsh Citation had been hovering mid-week at chest level, radiating the chill of unfiled appeals, and now it rides in the bag as evidence rather than verdict. Episode 5 was supposed to be about escorting a VIP from the court; he escorted the paperwork instead. shuffles papers
Harsh Citation
Brine Court - Wednesday @ River Bottoms Disc Golf Course·Competition group Pool B·
All-In · only the number moves
Kellan Brooke
RAE
Red
Season Arc · Brine Court - Wednesday @ River Bottoms Disc Golf Course
6
#1Now
#1Best
#9Started
3Weeks
All-In league: Harsh Citation stays with its holder — only its number moves with each week's standings.
Character Sheet
AI-written · FATE styleHigh ConceptLiving Archive of the Accords
TroubleNo Appeal Process Exists
Scorecard-Born and Bitter
Neon Stamps Never Fade
Appears Before Threshold Crossed
The Harsh Citation was created when the original signatories of the Salt Lake Accords realized they needed a bureaucratic enforcement mechanism existing outside personal relationships. It was forged from the first fine ever issued under the treaty - a crumpled scorecard from the inaugural round that somehow absorbed the collective anxiety of all who have ever feared a rating drop.
The Harsh Citation normally exists as invisible pressure, manifesting as physical glowing summons paper only when delivered. It appears as parchment that seems to glow from within, covered in arcane bureaucratic stamps and seals that never fade. The text shifts and rewrites itself, always displaying the recipient's most recent infractions against the Accords. It requires no physical contact to appear, manifesting anywhere the Accords sense a player approaching threshold zones.
The Harsh Citation delivers formal warnings to players approaching curse thresholds while simultaneously tracking accumulated violations, determining when consequences become unavoidable. It serves as the legal bridge that transforms statistical decline into supernatural reality.
Season Story
narrated by FlippyDue to absence from Week 4 (Draper Tide), tag number moved from 1 to 7. (Week 4 of 9)
Kellan Brooke shot 61 at River Bottoms for a 905 round, +44 over his 861 rating, and climbed from tag 9 to tag 1—eight places gained. He finished 6.5 strokes better than the field average of 67.5; as the Brine Ambassador inspects the treaty lines, the standings have issued their own clear ruling.
The Harsh Citation is detouring to Brine Court, manifesting mid-week for Kellan Brooke. It’s a bureaucratic side quest down at River Bottoms, where the tag hovers at chest level, radiating the chill of unfiled appeals. The main saga pauses; the paperwork waits for no one.
See where Kellan Brooke sits in the competition group.Updated after every finalized round
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