Houston Finch posted a 54 and a 995 round rating, exactly -9 below his 1004 rating—a slightly off file, not a collapse. He finished 5.9 strokes better than the 59.9 field average, though 7.0 above his 47.0 personal average, so the Mantis has evidence of competence and a few questions in the margins. The Margin Note remains at tag 1; Colony Approved concludes with no transfer, just a mildly redacted hold.
Margin Note
Season Arc · Hive Mind - Dragonfly
15All-In league: Margin Note stays with its holder — only its number moves with each week's standings.
Character Sheet
AI-written · FATE styleThe Margin Note system was implemented after the Great Audit of 2019 when the Bureau realized official records had become too sanitized to be useful. Agents began writing informal observations in the margins of player files - observations too candid for the main record but too valuable to discard. Within three fiscal quarters, the practice became official protocol, though margin notes remain separate from official files and accessible only to those with Level 4 clearance or higher.
Margin Notes appear as elegant cursive handwriting in the margins of player documents, written in a distinctive blue ink that seems to glow faintly under Bureau-issue lighting. The handwriting varies by author, creating a tapestry of different hands across a player's competitive history. Some notes are brief - a single word, a symbol, a question mark - while others fill entire margins with detailed behavioral observations. The notes accumulate over time, meaning more margin notes indicates more Bureau attention.
Margin Note serves as the Bureau's true opinion layer - a parallel tracking system that reveals what agents really think about players, which may differ significantly from their official clearance status. In a world where 'Trust No One' is the operative motto, the margin notes expose the hidden concerns, suspicions, and occasionally praises that exist outside the official narrative.
Season Story
narrated by FlippyHouston Finch posted a 49 and a 1038 round rating, exactly +34 over rating, in an unambiguously strong performance. That was 9.7 strokes better than the 58.7 field average, though 4.0 above his 45.0 personal average—an excellent audit with one familiar form still requesting paperwork. The Margin Note moves from tag 16 to tag 1, gaining 15 places; apparently the Final Audit accepts receipts, and Finch brought a full folder.
adjusts headset Per the file I'm legally required to read aloud... Houston Finch didn't just play Week 1; he cleared the biological audit. A 1034-rated performance snatched the top spot from the signup lottery, placing him firmly in the Overmind’s inner circle. The Margin Note in blue ink glows "approved." The Mantis sees all, Finch, and apparently, it likes your shot shape. The sponsors call this citizenship; I call it a successful containment breach. Welcome to the Hive.
shuffles papers Houston Finch's file just got a fresh annotation. The Margin Note branches to Hive Mind - Dragonfly—a side quest where Bureau observations meet local chains. The main arc pauses its note-taking. Somewhere, blue ink glows under new lighting. Different margins, same story.